Is this love poem cheesy or romantic?
I only write love poems depending on my emotions (sad,happy etc)
Someday…
I have only love you in my mind
I felt this unexplainable feeling
Which is sure hard to find
But one day, one day
A promise is kept for you
I have to confess someday
To tell you that "I love you"
Every moment i see you
It takes my breath away
Although you hav’nt got a clue
I always imagine you are mine
,holding hand among the sunset
Always sending chills down my spine
It’s all fantasies i will never forget…
I can never be with you
Even how much hard I try
It will never come true
Just thinking of it, it always make me cry,,,,
By Kyle A…
I wrote this when i was 12 Im 13 already.. so it might not be good…
what do you think? should i keep doing this?
hey guys should i post another one then?
Tags: chills, Clue, emotions, fantasies, hey guys, love poem, love poems, spine, sunset
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its good
keep writing
Very romantic
And at the age of 13… wow.
You should write more! I think you got a nick for this.
the ending makes me sad.
it’s romantic! a little cheasy, but romantic. if you want to go on, you can.
its quite good seen though you where 12 when you wrote it how could you fell all them things at that age keep on writing
personally i like it i dont think its cheesy
you are only 13 keep doing it and let the words flow…..you will see your writing style change.
dont stop writing….it evolves…you will see
omg! that completely illustrated the feelings i have for someone! you are very deep for a 13-year-old girl. please keep writing!
aww. thats so cute
i mean thats so deep for a 12 year old!
haha im 13 too. check my poemm its my last quesitonn
i love it though.
Love poems are one type that come from the heart
and mean well. As well as have emotions
regardless of who is writing this
Your poem is from the heart
and see there is planning for
the future. Or just hoping to be
with each other.
This has emotion as the last paragraph
says.
You are happy when with the person
sad when you two are apart.
Keep up the good work! that’s very moving for a 12 year old