I wrote a love poem for my ex girlfriend, is it good?
The blade of my knife
Faced away from your heart
Those last few nights
It turned and sliced you apart
This love that I tell
Now feels lonely as hell
From this padded prison cell
So many times I said
You’d only be mine
I gave my blood and my tears
And loved you cyanide
When you took my lips
I took your breath
Sometimes love’s better off dead
You’re all I need, make you only mine
I loved you so I set you free
I had to take your life
You’re all I need, you’re all I need
And I loved you but you didn’t love me
Laid out cold
Now we’re both alone
But killing you helped me keep you home
I guess it was bad
Cause love can be sad
But we finally made the news
Tied up smiling
I thought you were happy
Never opened your eyes
I thought you were napping
I got so much to learn
About love in this world
But we finally made the news
You’re all I need, make you only mine
I loved you so, so I put you to sleep.
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Very good
SteveC
umm no. i do not like it songs are much better and the poem is kinda creepy. there is a reason she is your ex.
Absolute freak.
Your some creep you are.
i think so far its beautiful but you should talk even more about your feelings. But its hard to pull off.
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Not gonna lie, it’s a little creepy…
You creep me out.The poem is good but still very creepy.