A couple of poems for a sad weekend. How is this one.?
fallen love
Magnificent in dusky rose,
Satin overlapped her breasts.
Like fresh blood upon the snow,
A tourniquet of lifes regrets.
Awakened, pulled out from the tomb,
Her spirit eclipsed the moon.
She outshone a falling star,
An ornament from far away.
And to her dead insurrection,
It was if her pallor gleamed.
Like an angels warmed by love,
Her lust screamed for release.
Raped of faith, she now embraced,
Looking frozen and disgraced.
With her disdain, inside her veins,
She sought to keep what age would claim.
On her whims, with no control,
Her soul sold for this toll.
Cruelty brought three orchids,
From the bowels of the abyss.
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Gosh, I thought I dug that hole deeper! jk
In this poem, which is great btw, it starts off like a tribute to someone special, magnificent, spirit eclipse the moon, etc. The description of your regrets at the loss of her, until she returns as the "thing" she has become, one of the devil’s advocates. Then you realize she is gone forever. That is how I read it anyway.
Thanks for sharing, I think it is very good.
Breathtaking…I realllly like it.
(I also would not put it on here…someone must steal it!)
fallen love is a great title
dusky rose an awesome way to describe her clothing
eclipsed moon,falling star, good words/
I love it
WOW absolutely fantabulous I just love all of your poems
Wow Baby this was outstanding and took my breath clean away.I loved the beginning to the very end.How you expressed your poems Thur these climatic words did it nicely..This is such a wonderful piece of art and i love it so much……… Bravo for this poem.,,.
awesome, you should get these published