Some on the sad side… Will you answer my poems?
Breathe
Just breathe
I will not be left alone
This is our love
Find strength
Find pulse
Let your spirit awake
This is not your time and I
Am not your death
Dance
Just dance
Together on the floor
I had the chance
I gave it up
But not again
I will take that step
In your hand
I hold my reasons
But alone I am without
The life you’ve given me
Will die
With you
And I
Will be
Dead to my Earth
And you
Will be laid beneath her
Sweet seconds
Only few remain
Make them our eternity
So we can stay
In motion
In dance
In life
Not pain
Replace your death with mine
I will die
I will rote
I will breathe no more
But I can’t take being
Without you
Denied
Forgotten
I will not forget
Memories
They haunt
Not hold
They chant and teas
For all the moments
That slipped away into the earth
Forsaken
Under stone
I know you
It isn’t like you to die
And me to mourn
I cannot cry
Without you
So do not leave
Only breathe
Until I say goodnight
Hold my hand
I am not enough
But I am all you have
And you, all I will never have again
Throw away the eulogy
And breathe
Just breathe
I can’t breathe for you
You think it’s long now, you should have seen it before I cut the three pages from it.
It is all one poem *Sigh* (-:)
Tags: chant, death dance, earth, eternity, goodnight, love, memories, poem, sad poems, Sad Side, spirit, teas
This sounds like the lament of someone whose love is dying, entreating not to be left behind, trying with beautiful words to "breathe" life back into the dying lover. It is haunting and sorrowful. I am totally taken by it. Thank you.
i liked them…..but i cant tell when the start and when they end…but i like them!
~Hara Kantana
I enjoy how you lace in things that have happened into your poems… that is what these are all about though. The dancing part almost made me cry from remembering the other night.
Good job on progressing, though I am not sure how many people will appreciate this. Not many take the time to read these long ones.
You seem yo be harping on something. Though I always appreciate your poetic talent, in which is not lacking in this poem, it is not appropriate to babel on about so small an issue. I know how close to your heart all this is but if you could only step back and see it from my perspective then…
This is a wonderful poem but, pleas try and create a more condensed way of expressing.