I wrote another poem! It’s called Fear, and I want to know what you think about it, alright? Remember that I haven’t even turned 11 yet. If you want to see my other poem, click on the link http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AqLqY7rZ8GMC65Nu8yM362oazKIX;_ylv=3?qid=20090425183541AAXijvW Thanks!
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Fear
A lack of love, an abundance of hate, these are all things we can fear.
A fear of there being no heaven above, not knowing what may await.
Being scared, afraid, upset, my dear we must be brave! With me there’s always an abundance of love, so with courage we must behave.
Please try and trust me, I know that it’s true, you’ve given me courage, listen I’ll give some to you.
I’m not even scared about anything though. I just got bored and found a pencil and some paper, so please don’t worry about me being scared or depressed. Thanks!
Oh, I don’t want you to go easy on me just because of my age. Please treat me as if I were an adult, because I want true critism. Thanks!
I meant criticism…sorry for spelling that wrong. Again, please tell me how you truly feel about it, because considering my age won’t help me become a poet. Thank you.

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arent these sad?

I went to a party,
And remembered what you said.
You told me not to drink, Mom
So I had a sprite instead.
Now I’m lying on the pavement,
And I hear the policeman say,
The kid that caused this wreck was drunk,
Mom, his voice seems far away.
Tell sister not to be afraid, Mom
Tell daddy to be brave,
And when I go to heaven,
Put Daddy’s Girl on my grave.
My breath is getting shorter, Mom
I’m getting really scared.
These are my final moments,
And I’m so unprepared.
I wish that you could hold me Mom,
As I lie here and die.
I wish that I could say,
"I love you, Mom!"
So I love you and good-bye… |||
here is another::
Near to the door
he paused to stand
as he took his class ring
off her hand
all who were watching
did not speak as a silent tear
ran down his cheek
and through his mind
the memories ran
of the moments they walked
and ran in the sand hand and hand
but now her eyes were so terrible cold
for he would never again
have her to hold
they watched in silence
as he bent near
and whispered the words..
"I LOVE YOU" in her ear
he touched her face and started to cry
as he put on his ring and wanted to die
and just then the wind began to blow
as they lowered her casket
into the snow….
this is what happens
to man alive…..
when friends let friends….
drink and drive.
if you have any other poems that are sad or just ones that you like please put them in your answer! thanks for reading!!!!

Tags: casket, cheek, drunk mom, good bye, heaven, memories, pavement, poems, policeman, sad poems, silence, sprite

I know that you guys need a lot of attention and that once you made up your mind about something, it’s hard to change it. My ex bf said he wanted his freedom and he wanted to be single. We were in love and lived together for 2 years. But what, if ANYTHING is possible under heaven, will make you want to go back out with your girlfriend? Please help me out. Thanks all you sexy Aries!

Tags: Aries, bf, freedom, girlfriend, heaven, love, Sexy

I’ve been divorced for about 5 years and we have a son together. Anyway I moved on a year after the divorce and got into a relationship with a wonderful man. We had a baby boy in 2005 and we were happy in love….Until 2007 he passed away. Ever since he left us and went to heaven I’ve been healing and raising our son as best as I can myself. My ex-husband and I have always gotten along and our 7yo lives with him. He is not in a relationship and devotes all his time and effort to our son. Yes he’s a great daddy!!! He’s invited me every now and then to stay the weekend at his house so the boys could be together and of course I stay in my son’s room with the boys and my ex-husband stays in his own room so it won’t be weird. But lately I’ve been realizing how much different he has changed for the good…and how much more care he shows people and me really impresses me…like he grew up into a wonderful man. I mean we were in our early 20′s when we were married so I’m sure we both did some growing up.
Anyway…. I’m staring to care for him again. Kind of like when we first met. Like a little crush…I know he has always had that piece of my life and heart but I’m not sure if I should turn away from the feeling or let it be and hope he feels the same. IDK…He may not even like me that way anymore and I’m just going to get hurt if I see him fall for another woman.
Our son..lol…bless his little heart…tries to play match maker telling me his dad still loves me but he always says just kidding while giggling and tells me I wish you and daddy where married again.
I really don’t know what to do with my feelings…to be honest I don’t want to tell him because he may feel the total opposite and I’d be hurt if he told me that straight to my face.
What shall I do?…Should I just back off and give it time???

Do you think we could ever love each other again???
OMG…sorry about the words that I accidentally spelled wrong….I know it probably sounds childish so understand the best you can plz!!! :O)
To answer some of Peter’s Q….We divorced because we were to proud of ourselves thinking we each were right at everything and never gave each other a chance to give in and understand each other. Like I said we were young and stupid to let one another go just like that….and our son stays with his dad because he want’s to and I believe our son has every right to be with his dad. I raised him from a baby until he asked "mommy can I live with dad because I miss him" and I always want my boys to be happy so his dad and I agreed he could live with him. He’s daddy boy and the only grandchild on his dads side so you could imagine how much attention he gets from his dads family.

Tags: 7yo, baby boy, dad, divorce, feelings, heaven, idk, little heart, love, match maker, pl, relationship, Weird, wonderful man