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unloved by love
down the hall we passed with a smile and a glance
she had a beautiful style
her eyes was so dark and black
giving me the feeling that i wanna dance
we passed as if nothing happened
then i decided to turn around
her eyes caught me looking back
she smiled and giggled making me feel like a clown
next day we greeted each other
smiles and hugs
her eyes was so unique
i kissed her on the cheek
one month passed and its me and her
we smile hug and kiss
she whispers love in my ears
i cant believe a girl like this exist
a week came by
hugs giggles and kisses
but theres only one problem
its not with me
i loved you
but i hate you
you broke my heart and i can never forgive you
i guess it was never meant to be
Roger
8-10-08
Tags: cheek, clown, ears, glance, heart, kisses, sad love poem, smile, smiles, unloved, whispers


