
so im trying to start writing
ive written stuff before but i dont normally like what i write…so i need opinions…and yes i know there are silly little love poems…oh and i also dont have names so any suggestions???
Poem one:
its all so confusing to know just how to feel
im lost in so many emotions ive forgotten witch ones are real.
im left here standing not knowing what to do.
ive become a home to confusion,
and im left without a clue.
my heart and mind are in a battel,
and i know not who will win.
ive come so far i cant face being broken again
you say that wont happen,
and nothing will change.
but i cant help but wonder
if all guys are really are the same
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Poem 2:
have you known how hard ive fallen,
have i dropped enough clues.
do you know that every passing day
the only thing i think of is you.
i dont want it to be like this,
i wish i hadnt gone head over heels.
is this it?
is this how?
true love really feels.
but your not mine,and im not yours.
its a sad fact,that i wish wasnt true.
all i want is to be in you arms.
all i want is to be with you..
so what ya think im not finished really but im getting stuck..
and help would be appreciated
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