I wrote another poem! It’s called Fear, and I want to know what you think about it, alright? Remember that I haven’t even turned 11 yet. If you want to see my other poem, click on the link http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AqLqY7rZ8GMC65Nu8yM362oazKIX;_ylv=3?qid=20090425183541AAXijvW Thanks!
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Fear
A lack of love, an abundance of hate, these are all things we can fear.
A fear of there being no heaven above, not knowing what may await.
Being scared, afraid, upset, my dear we must be brave! With me there’s always an abundance of love, so with courage we must behave.
Please try and trust me, I know that it’s true, you’ve given me courage, listen I’ll give some to you.
I’m not even scared about anything though. I just got bored and found a pencil and some paper, so please don’t worry about me being scared or depressed. Thanks!
Oh, I don’t want you to go easy on me just because of my age. Please treat me as if I were an adult, because I want true critism. Thanks!
I meant criticism…sorry for spelling that wrong. Again, please tell me how you truly feel about it, because considering my age won’t help me become a poet. Thank you.

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